A Room of My Own: Paris Mail Haiku

twilit shadows fall

on my wrinkled Paris mail

signed Yours forever

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the dark side

of a winter moon ... 

between us, the hush

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this snowy night

alone at the Gold Mountain ...

owner, me and rice balls

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snowonsnow ...

in a world of one color

the sound of coughing 

FYI: This haiku alludes to Basho's:

winter solitude 

inn a world of one colour 

the sound of the wind 

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rain-beaded wire fence 

a child migrant's long stare

at southbound geese