Friday, February 15, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Evening Drizzle Haiku by Christine L. Villa

English Original

evening drizzle
notes from his guitar
perfume the air

Haigaonline, 12:2, December 2011

Christine L. Villa


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

夜晚細雨
他的吉他旋律使得
滿室馨香

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

夜晚细雨
他的吉他旋律使得
满室馨香


Bio Sketch

Christine L. Villa is currently living with her husband in California. She loves writing for children, taking photographs, and making jewelry. Her haiku and haiga have been published in various international journals and e-books. You can read more of her works on her blog Blossom Rain.

11 comments:

  1. Christine's skillful use of synaesthesia (through a good verb choice), which results in the shift in tone, makes this poem emotionally effective.

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  2. Thank you, Chen-ou! I'm honored to have my haiku published here. :-)

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  3. Congratulations on a lovely haiku Chrissi

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  4. Congratulations, Chrissi, on your lovely haiku!

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  6. Congratulations Chrissi. You are the best!. You write with your Heart and that makes you unique. Two thumbs up! :)

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    1. Thanks for the generous comment, heARTEMIS!

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  7. I'm a huge Chrissi fan. Lovely poem.

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    1. Oh, I'm so honored, Scott! I'm also a huge fan of yours. :-)

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