full moon
dust
in a paper box
concluding haiku of "so," Contemporary Haibun Online, 5:4, December 2009
Ed Baker
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
滿月
灰塵
在一個紙盒
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
满月
灰尘
在一个纸盒
Bio Sketch
Born in Washington, D.C. in 1941, Ed Baker is an artist and poet who resides in Washington, D.C.. He is 72. Full Moon and Stone Girl E-pic are two of his recent titles. For more information about his work, see Joseph Hutchison's and John Mingay's reviews.
The shift in image and theme makes this haiku emotionally effective.
ReplyDeleteWhat's left unsaid is more important than what's stated.