first kiss story
lost in our history ...
half moon rising
Rebecca Drouilhet
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
初吻故事
從我們的歷史中消失...
半月上升
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
初吻故事
从我们的历史中消失...
半月上升
Bio Sketch
Rebecca Drouilhet is a 58-year old retired registered nurse. In 2012,
she won a Sakura award in the Vancouver Cherry Blossom Haiku
International. Her haiku and tanka have appeared in A Hundred Gourds, Modern Haiku, Frogpond, World Haiku Review, Prune Juice, The Heron's Nest, and the Lakeview International Journal of Literature and Art.
Ls 1&2 successfully establish the context, thematic and emotive, while the symbolically rich image of a half moon, which indicates a division into two different two parts, in L3 enhances the tone and mood of the poem.
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