between beats
on the cardiogram --
patter of rain
Creatrix, September 2014
Carl Seguiban
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
在心電圖上
心臟搏動之間 --
淅瀝雨聲
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
在心电图上
心脏搏动之间 --
淅沥雨声
Bio Sketch
Carl Seguiban resides in British Columbia which inspires his haiku. His poems have been published in Mayfly, Modern Haiku, Frogpond, Bottle Rockets, A Hundred Gourds, Moongarlic, Presence, Under the Basho, paper wasp, The Heron's Nest, Cattails, Prune Juice among others.
The contrast of sounds between the two parts of the poem is visually and emotionally effective, and the symbolically rich closing image, "patter of rain," opens up a space for the reader's imagination and interpretation.
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ReplyDeleteWhat I really lingered on was the quiet tension between the clinical image of a cardiogram and the softness of rain. That pause “between beats” feels deeply human. It oddly reminded me how even precise systems, like concierge medicine new york city, still leave room for listening and nuance.
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