spring afternoon
the paperbark sheds
layers of light
Daily Haiga, March 3, 2016
Jane Williams
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
春天下午
白千層樹撒落
多層光影
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
春天下午
白千层树撒落
多层光影
Bio Sketch
Jane Williams is an Australian poet based in Tasmania. To read more of her poetry, please visit her website.
L1 establishes the seasonal context and mood while imagistic Ls 2&3 greatly enhance the visual aspect of the poem and lift the poem up a notch.
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