Wednesday, November 29, 2017

A Room of My Own: Longing Haiku

( this longing ... )
the garden path strewn
with cherry petals
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  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐November 29, 2017 at 9:57 AM

    Below is my another haiku that employs parentheses to convey the feeling deep inside:


    snowed in ...
    ( this longing
    deep inside )

    Honorable Mention, 2015 World Haiku Competition

    Note: Below is excerpted from the judge's comment: ... "an imaginative use of parentheses during a time of heavy snow."

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