Wednesday, February 5, 2020

Butterfly Dream: Winter Chill Haiku by Anna Maria Domburg-Sancristoforo

English Original

winter chill --
I miss you
when I see you

Failed Haiku, 4:37, January 2019

Anna Maria Domburg-Sancristoforo


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

冬天的寒意 --
當我看見你時
我就想念你

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

冬天的寒意 --
当我看见你时
我就想念你


Bio Sketch

Anna Maria Domburg-Sancristoforo was born in Genoa, Italy, and she now lives in the Netherlands. She worked as a university teacher and translator at Leiden University. She writes haiku in both Italian and English. Her haiku, tanka  and senryu are published in international magazines, blogs and e-journals.

2 comments:

  1. L1 sets the seasonal context and mood while the use of repetition is thematically effective and emotionally poignant, and on second reading, L1 successfully carries symbolic significance,indicative of a failing relationship.

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    1. Thank you for the publication and the comment.

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