winter chill --
I miss you
when I see you
Failed Haiku, 4:37, January 2019
Anna Maria Domburg-Sancristoforo
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
冬天的寒意 --
當我看見你時
我就想念你
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
冬天的寒意 --
当我看见你时
我就想念你
Bio Sketch
Anna Maria Domburg-Sancristoforo was born in Genoa, Italy, and she now lives in the Netherlands. She worked as a university teacher and translator at Leiden University. She writes haiku in both Italian and English. Her haiku, tanka and senryu are published in international magazines, blogs and e-journals.
L1 sets the seasonal context and mood while the use of repetition is thematically effective and emotionally poignant, and on second reading, L1 successfully carries symbolic significance,indicative of a failing relationship.
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