Tuesday, March 3, 2020

A Room of My Own: Tornado of Bats Haiku

tornado of bats
the calendar dates
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  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐March 4, 2020 at 4:11 PM

    It might be interesting to do a comparative reading of the following haiku:

    supper time
    a sky of fruit bats
    streaks the moon

    AMBROSIA: Journal of Fine Haiku, 3, Spring 2009

    Barbara A. Taylor

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    1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐March 5, 2020 at 9:17 AM

      Another bat haiku which I think might work well as a sequel to Barbara's haiku:

      canyon dawn:
      a bat folding dark
      into a crevice

      Ruth Yarrow

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