English Original
harvest morn
rat-a-tat-tat of olives
on our tarp
Stardust Haiku, 69, September 2022
Roberta Beach Jacobson
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
豐收的早晨
橄欖落在我們的防水布上
的噠-噠-噠聲音
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
丰收的早晨
橄榄落在我们防水布上
的哒-哒-哒声音
Bio Sketch
Roberta Beach Jacobson (http://www.robertajacobson.com) is a humorist from Iowa, USA.
Enhanced by the use of onomatopoeia, the multi-sensory (both auditory and visual) image of L2 &3 thematically enhances the tone and mood of L1.
ReplyDeleteAnd it might be interesting to do a thematic comparative reading of the following harvest morning haiku:
grapefruit harvest --
the morning sun
left dangling
Honourable Mention, 2012 Betty Drevniok Award
Pamela Cooper