.......................... sandpiper
Honorable Mention, 2024 Porad Award Winners
petro c.k.
Commentary: Enhanced by the visually effective use of punctuation marks, "..........................," this one-word visual haiku leads the reader to a shorebird, sandpiper. On a second read-through, I think the punctuation marks function like/works well as the footprints left by this sandpiper, which reminds me of the following traditional, three-line sandpiper haiku:
wet beach sand --
a sandpiper's song
of footprints
The Way of Haiku, 2019
Michael Dylan Welch
Note: For more examples about one-word haiku, see "To the Lighthouse: Experimentation with One-Word Haiku by Pravat Kumar Padhy"
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