messages
in broken bottles
all those words
you didn't say
glinting in the sun
Bright Stars, 1, 2014
Debbie Strange
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
信息
在破瓶之中
所有這些
你沒說的話
在太陽下閃閃發光
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
信息
在破瓶之中
所有这些
你没说的话
在太阳下闪闪发光
Bio Sketch
Debbie
Strange belongs to the Writers' Collective of Manitoba and several
haiku and tanka organizations. Her writing has received awards and been
published in numerous journals. She is a singer-songwriter and
photographer whose photographs have been published and exhibited. She
is currently assembling a haiga collection. Visit her on twitter
@Debbie_Strange
Ls 1&2, referring to the cross-culturally allusive phrase "Message in a Bottle," establish the thematic and emotional context, while Ls 3-5 enhance the negative mood of the poem.
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