in the tube
of a breaking wave
the boy surfer
emerges into sunlight --
a butterfly’s first flight
Gusts, 21, spring/summer 2015
Marilyn Humbert
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
在滾動管狀
的破浪內
一個衝浪男孩
湧入陽光中 --
一隻蝴蝶的第一次飛行
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
在滚动管状
的破浪内
一个冲浪男孩
涌入阳光中 --
一只蝴蝶的第一次飞行
Bio Sketch
Marilyn
Humbert lives in the Northern Suburbs of Sydney NSW surrounded by bush.
Her pastimes include writing free verse poetry, tanka, tanka prose and
related genre. She is the leader of Bottlebrush Tanka Group and member
of the Huddle and Bowerbird Tanka Groups. Her tanka appears in
Australian and international journals.
The stunning visuals and the implied simile between Ls 1-4 and L5 make this tanka effective and affecting.
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