all our
past quarrels
parrot talk
146th World Haiga Contest, October 2016
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
過去我們
所有的爭吵
鸚鵡學說話
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
过去我们
所有的争吵
鹦鹉学说话
Bio Sketch
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi, a Master Black Belt in Six Sigma, is currently working in a Pharma Company as Head of Operational Excellence. He lives in Hyderabad, India.
The thematically resonant juxtaposition of "past quarrels" and "parrot talk" effectively enhances the "hai" aspect of the poem.
ReplyDeleteI've read many of Sambangi's haiku entries and this achievement does not surprise me, he is a stand alone haijin with his writing and only gets better as he continues his haiku. The haiku entry here the parrot is just like my wife always saying the same things to me, annoying but she's my wife.
ReplyDeleteVery good phrase, pivot and final fragment which gives and excellent juxtaposition to the phrase. I love it!
ReplyDeleteKaren E.
Wonderful piece of writing. Sambangi is a master of haiku. How many of our quarrels are just endless repeats of the same issues...
ReplyDeleteCongrats.
Suraja
Thank you Chen-ou, James, Karen, Suraja...with your kind words you made me feel motivated to write better haiku
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