English Original
breakup talk
their shadows touch
for a moment
Padmini K
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
分手談判
他們的陰影相互碰觸
一會兒
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
分手谈判
他们的阴影相互碰触
一会儿
Bio Sketch
Padmini K has a penchant for nature, long walks and chocolates. She lives in Singapore with her husband and 4 year old child.
L1 sets the theme and emotional context while the "shadows" in L2 work effectively on two levels, literal and symbolic. And L3 adds psychological depth to the haiku.
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