tsunami ...
a city hangs
upside down
A Vast Sky, 2015
Keith A. Simmonds
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
海嘯 ...
一座城市被衝撞
亂七八糟
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
海啸 ...
一座城市被冲撞
乱七八糟
Bio Sketch
Keith
A. Simmonds was born in Barbados and is a citizen of both Trinidad
& Tobago and France. He was a teacher of French language and
literature at the secondary-school level in Trinidad & Tobago for
twenty-five years. He is a lover of all types of poetry and has been
writing haiku seriously since 2004. Some of his works appear in Mainichi Daily News, Capoliveri, Cascina Macondo, Simply Haiku, Yamadera Basho Memorial Museum Haiku, and Shamrock.
L1 sets the theme while the use of hyperbole in Ls 2&3 is visually and emotionally poignant and effective.
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