Friday, July 16, 2021

One Man's Maple Moon: Blue Lace Agate Tanka by Debbie Strange

English Original

I carry
an ocean within
my pocket . . .
this blue lace agate
etched with ancient tides
 
Honorable Mention, 2018 Fleeting Words Tanka Competition

Debbie Strange

 
Chinese Translation (Traditional)

在口袋裡
我攜帶
一片滄海 ...
這顆藍色蕾絲瑪瑙
是用古老的潮汐蝕刻

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

在口袋里
我携带
一片沧海 ...
这颗蓝色蕾丝玛瑙
是用古老的潮汐蚀刻


Bio Sketch

Debbie Strange is an award-winning Canadian short form poet, haiga artist, and photographer. Keibooks released her second full-length poetry collection, Three-Part Harmony: Tanka Verses in 2018, and Folded Word published her haiku chapbook, A Year Unfolding in 2017. An archive of publications may be accessed at http://debbiemstrange.blogspot.com/

1 comment:

  1. An implicit simile is effectively established between L2 and L4 in this visually and emotionally evocative and symbolically rich tanka.

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