Tuesday, March 28, 2023

One Man's Maple Moon: Wall of Smoke Tanka by Paul Williamson

English Original

pink glows
along the grey wall
of smoke
unconquered flames
claim the forest ridge

Paul Williamson


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

粉紅色的光芒
沿著灰色煙霧
的巨牆
尚未熄滅的火焰
攻佔大片的森林山脊

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

粉红色的光芒
沿着灰色烟雾
的巨墙
尚未熄灭的火焰
攻占大片的森林山脊


Bio Sketch

Paul Williamson is an Australian poet who has published poems on eclectic topics in magazines including Neverending StoryEucalypt, Tanka Music AnthologyRagged EdgesPoems to Wear, Poetry Bridges, Atlas Poetica, Gusts, Skylark, RibbonsQuadrant and Cordite.  He writes poems to clarify feelings and impressions, and record them. He has five collections: The DNA Bookshelf, Moments from Red HillTo the Spice IslandsEdge of Southern Bright and Ties to Red Hill  in 2018.

2 comments:

  1. Paul's tanka effectively builds, line by line, to a visually and emotionally poignant ending that reveals the theme of forest fires.

    And the tanka below could be read as a sequel to Paul's:

    in the forest
    shadows slip between
    two worlds,
    blackened stumps, withered leaves
    lost souls ...

    Atlas Poetica, 9, July 2011

    Marilyn Humbert

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