English Original
seamless sky ...
petals fell in the tinkling
of chimes
Simply Haiku, 10:2, Winter 2013
Asni Amin
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
一望無際的天空......
在風鈴的叮噹聲中
花瓣已飄落
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
一望无际的天空......
在风铃的叮噹声中
花瓣已飘落
Bio Sketch
Asni Amin lives in Singapore and works as a librarian in a school. She started writing haiku in 2012 and has her works published in Simply Haiku and various other ebooks on line.
The effective use of synaesthesia and the temporal shift make this haiku emotionally poignant.
ReplyDeleteA well-crafted mood haiku.
Thank you for the honor, Mr. Liu.
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