Thursday, April 25, 2013

Butterfly Dream: Seamless Sky Haiku by Asni Amin

English Original

seamless sky ...
petals fell in the tinkling
of chimes                                    

Simply Haiku, 10:2, Winter 2013

Asni Amin


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

一望無際的天空......
在風鈴的叮噹聲中
花瓣已飄落    

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

一望无际的天空......
在风铃的叮噹声中
花瓣已飘落    


Bio Sketch

Asni Amin lives in Singapore and works as a librarian in a school.  She started writing haiku in 2012 and has her works published in Simply Haiku and various other ebooks on line.

2 comments:

  1. The effective use of synaesthesia and the temporal shift make this haiku emotionally poignant.

    A well-crafted mood haiku.

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  2. Thank you for the honor, Mr. Liu.

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