on a hill
autumn leaves vibrate
in the sun;
so much to absorb
on any single day
Ribbons, 5:3, Autumn 2009
Adelaide B. Shaw
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
山丘上
秋天樹葉在陽光下
顫動;
在任何日子
有這麼多要吸收
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
山丘上
秋天树叶在阳光下
颤动;
在任何日子
有这麽多要吸收
Bio Sketch
Adelaide B. Shaw lives in Milbrook, NY with her husband. She has published short fiction, children’s poetry and stories, haiku, tanka, haibun and haiga. She has served as an editor and as a contest judge for Japanese style poetry. Her haiku blog is: www.adelaide-whitepetals.blogspot.com/ Her haiku collection, An Unknown Road, won a 2009 Merit Book Award sponsored by the Haiku Association of America.
The upper verse successfully sets a scenic context while the lower verse conveys the implied speaker's thought through a scene. Nature (embodied in autumn leaves) as metaphor is subtly established.
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