graveyard visit
a spider's web glitters
in a broken vase
Sketchbook, 2012
Máire Morrissey-Cummins
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
蜘蛛網閃爍
在一個破碎的花瓶
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
墓地探访
蜘蛛网闪烁
在一个破碎的花瓶
Bio Sketch
Máire Morrissey-Cummins is from Ireland and was named in the top 100 European Creative Haiku list of 2012. She has been published in Bamboo Dreams and is a member of Haiku Ireland and the Irish Haiku Society.
L1 successfully sets an emotive context while Ls 2&3 enhance the tone and mood.
ReplyDeleteAnd the concluding image not only indicates the passage of time, but also implies a past relationship not in good shape
Chen-ou-Liu, thank you for your thoughts and translation on this ku. I appreciate it and you are correct in your analysis. Maire
ReplyDeleteMaire:
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked my reading.
Thanks for your support of my project.
And look forward to reading more of your new work.
Chen-ou