I'm just saying
how good it is to see her
when suddenly
she sticks out her tongue --
catches a snowflake
American Tanka, Fall 2000
Larry Kimmel
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
我只是說
看到她有多好
突然地
她伸出舌頭 --
去捕捉雪花
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
我只是说
看到她有多好
突然地
她伸出舌头 --
去捕捉雪花
Bio Sketch
Larry Kimmel is a US poet. He holds degrees from Oberlin Conservatory and Pittsburgh University, and has worked at everything from steel mills to libraries. Recent books are Blue Night & the inadequacy of long-stemmed roses, this hunger, tissue-thin, and The Piercing Blue of Sirius. He lives with his wife in the hills of Western Massachusetts.
The unexpected narrative turn at the end of poem says something more about her personality than about her relationship with the speaker.
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