filling this cup
the moon rises
to the brim
World Haiku Review, August 2013
Simon Hanson
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
正在倒茶
月亮向上升起
到達杯緣
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
正在倒茶
月亮向上升起
到达杯缘
Bio Sketch
Simon
Hanson lives in country South Australia enjoying the open spaces and
nearby coastal environments. He is excited by the natural world and
relishes moments of the numinous in ordinary things. He is published in
various journals and anthologies and never realised how much the moon
meant to him until he started writing haiku.
The haikai twist in L3 makes this poem work emotionally and visually effective.
ReplyDeleteCleverly done.