splashing
onto his good-by note
full of spelling mistakes
my big, fat tears
of happiness
Fire Pearls, 2, Summer 2013
Joanne Morcom
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
我的斗大
幸福眼淚
飛濺到
他滿是拼寫錯誤
的告別便條
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
我的斗大
幸福眼泪
飞溅到
他满是拼写错误
的告别便条
Bio Sketch
Joanne
Morcom is a poet and social worker in Calgary, Alberta, Canada. Her
poetry appears in a variety of print and online publications, as well as
in her two collections, A Nameless Place and About the Blue Moon. Visit her website at www.joannemorcom.ca.
This tanka is the allusive and hyperbolic rendering of a relationship breakup, and I'm impressed by Joanne's playful yoking together of a goodbye note (,which is replete with spelling mistakes) with the speaker's "big, fat" tears of "happiness" (as in "My Big Fat Greek Wedding")
ReplyDeleteThis made me smile on a dark morning!
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