coming storm
less and less space
between us
Cattails, September 2014
Maria Tomczak
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
即將到來的風暴
在我們之間
空間越來越少
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
即将到来的风暴
在我们之间
空间越来越少
Bio Sketch
Maria Tomczak lives in Opole, Poland. She enjoys writing haiku, poems and short stories. As a mother she also writes fairy tales for her son. She is interested in Japanese culture and poetry, especially haiku and related forms.
L1 establishes the thematic context of the poem while the multifaceted word, "space," opens up an interpretative space for the reader to co-author the poem.
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