Friday, November 6, 2015

A Room of My Own: Long Winter Night Tanka

twilight ushers in
a long winter night ...
one by one
thoughts of my hometown
unfolding

4 comments:

  1. Beautiful, Chen-ou. The narrator's melancholy and homesickness are almost palpable and I can imagine his thoughts appearing one by one - just like the stars.

    marion

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    1. Marion:

      Your encouraging comment has made my day. Thanks.

      And look forward to reading your work.

      Chen-ou

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