Tuesday, December 8, 2015

One Man's Maple Moon: Cobwebs Tanka by Marilyn Humbert

English Original

cobwebs tangle
in the dusty corners
of my house --
like the burdens
weighing on my mind

Cattails, May 2014

Marilyn Humbert


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

滿布塵埃
的屋子角落
蜘蛛網糾結在一起 --
像是壓在心頭
的重擔

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

满布尘埃
的屋子角落
蜘蛛网纠结在一起 --
像是压在心头
的重担


Bio Sketch

Marilyn Humbert lives in the Northern Suburbs of Sydney NSW surrounded by bush. Her pastimes include writing free verse poetry, tanka, tanka prose and related genre. She is the leader of Bottlebrush Tanka Group and member of the Huddle and Bowerbird Tanka Groups. Her tanka appears in Australian and international journals.

1 comment:

  1. The concrete disquieting image in Ls 1-3 shares and enhances the emotional weight of the tanka, adding psychological depth to the main statement in Ls 4&5.

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