partly cloudy
tulips in shadow
tulips in light
Frogpond, 27:3, Autumn 2004
Agnes Eva Savich
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
局部陰天
陰影中的鬱金香
陽光中的鬱金香
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
局部阴天
阴影中的鬱金香
阳光中的鬱金香
Bio Sketch
Agnes Eva Savich has been writing haiku since 2003. She was a featured Southwestern haijin in Roadrunner in 2006. She has published a collection of early poetry, titled The Watcher: Poems (Cedar Leaf Press, 2009) and hopes to work on her first haiku book soon. She now lives in Austin, TX.
The phrases "in shadow" and "in light" in Ls 2&3 effectively provide a scent link (in Basho's sense of the phrase) to L1, "partly" "cloudy," and Agnes's use of the zoom-in technique is emotionally effective.
ReplyDeleteAgnes, sweet!
ReplyDeleteCongrats.