Thursday, September 29, 2016

Butterfly Dream: Falling Snow Haiku by Meik Blöttenberger

English Original

just where it should be
snow falling
between      us

ITO EN Semifinalist, January 2015

Meik Blöttenberger

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

在我們    之間

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

在我们    之间 

Bio Sketch

Meik Blöttenberger has been writing haiku for over twelve years and his haiku have appeared in Frogpond, Modern Haiku, and The Heron's Nest. His other passions are photography and growing bonsai.

1 comment:

  1. Thematically speaking, Meik's effective use of "just" and blank spaces strengthens the poem, and on a second reading, "falling snow" takes on emotional and symbolic significance.