lights out
one by one
snowflakes fall
Acorn, 12, Spring 2004
Agnes Eva Savich
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
熄燈
一個接一個
雪花飄落
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
熄灯
一个接一个
雪花飘落
Bio Sketch
Agnes Eva Savich has been writing haiku since 2003. She was a featured Southwestern haijin in Roadrunner in 2006. She has published a collection of early poetry, titled The Watcher: Poems (Cedar Leaf Press, 2009) and hopes to work on her first haiku book soon. She now lives in Austin, TX.
Combined with a pivotal line, the comparison between the two parts of the poem is visually and tonally effective.
ReplyDeleteA well-crafted mood haiku.
The sound of silence... snow falling flake by flake.
ReplyDeleteYes, a mood of peace, tranquility.
Love it.
Jan Benson
The sound of silence... snow falling flake by flake.
ReplyDeleteYes, a mood of peace, tranquility.
Love it.
Jan Benson