upstream paddle
keeping pace
with the moon
Hedgerow, 27, May 2015
Julie Warther
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
向上游划行
與月亮
保持一樣的速度
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
向上游划行
与月亮
保持一样的速度
Bio Sketch
Julie Warther is the author of What Was Here (Folded Word Press 2015) and serves as the Midwest Regional Coordinator for the Haiku Society of America.
L1 sets the scene/theme while Ls 2&3 effectively enhance the "hai" aspect of the poem.
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