summer breeze
up on the swing
I escape my shadow
Frameless Sky, 5, 2016
Debbi Antebi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
夏天微風
我坐在鞦韆上面擺盪
逃避我的影子
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
夏天微风
我坐在鞦韆上面摆盪
逃避我的影子
Bio Sketch
Debbi Antebi exhales oxygen while writing poems. Her work has appeared in a number of print and online journals. She lives in Istanbul, Turkey, with her husband and books
A joyful and liberating experience is effectively conveyed through the juxtaposition of emotionally resonant and symbolically rich images. And the last line works well on at least two levels, literal and figurative.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Debbi!
ReplyDeleteJan
I love it!! :) :)
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