lowering sun --
in its glow
a lacework of leaves
Honorable Mention, World Haiku Review, June 2016
Lyn Reeves
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
低垂的太陽 --
在它的光芒映照下
花邊狀的樹葉
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
垂垂太阳 --
在它的光芒映照下
花边状的树叶
Bio Sketch
Lyn
Reeves is Vice President of the Australian Haiku Society and
co-ordinator of the Hobart haiku group, Watersmeet. She was haiku editor
for Famous Reporter from 1994- 2012 and an occasional editor for paper wasp. Her first haiku collection, Walking the Tideline, was published by Pardalote Press in 2001.
A beautiful moment in mature is keenly captured in this imagistic haiku. And L3, a "lacework of leaves," greatly enhances the visual aspect of the haiku.
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