New Year’s snow
a naked baby doll
at the curb
Terri L. French
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
新年下雪
在路邊一個光溜溜
的洋娃娃
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
新年下雪
在路边一个光溜溜
的洋娃娃
Bio Sketch
Terri L. French is an author, editor and haiku poet living in Huntsville, Alabama. She serves on the Board of Directors of The Haiku Foundation and is past Southeast Regional Coordinator for The Haiku Society of America. Terri is the former editor of Prune Juice Journal of senryu and kyoka and was recently added to the editorial team of the online journal Haibun Today.
L1 sets the theme while visually and emotionally poignant Ls 2&3 work well on two levels, literal and figurative.
ReplyDeleteTerry's haiku reminds me of one of my dollhouse haiku with a similar curb scene:
winter drizzle …
a doll house
at the curb
Modern Haiku, 43:3, 2012