an I.V. line
anchors me to the monitor
thoughts still wander
Modern Haiku, 29:1, 1998
Angelee Deodhar
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
靜脈注射管
將我連接到監視器上
我的思想仍在徘徊
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
静脉注射管
将我连接到监视器上
我的思想仍在徘徊
Bio Sketch
Angelee
Deodhar of Chandigarh (India) was an eye surgeon by profession as well
as a haiku poet, translator, and artist. Her haiku/haiga had been
published internationally .She didn't have her own website.To
promote haiku in India, she had translated six books of haiku from
English to Hindi.
The contrasts (physical vs mental; still vs wandering; hissing vs silent ...) between Ls 1&2 and L3 are emotionally effective, and what's left unsaid (after L3) is at least as important as what's stated.
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