English Original
monsoon --
a lone paper boat spins
into rain song
VerseWrights, 2017
Angelee Deodhar
季節性大風
一艘孤單的紙船不停地旋轉
進入雨歌聲中
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
季节性大风
一艘孤单的纸船不停地旋转
进入雨歌声中
Bio Sketch
Angelee Deodhar of Chandigarh (India) was an eye surgeon by profession as well as a haiku poet, translator, and artist. Her haiku/haiga had been published internationally .She didn't have her own website.To promote haiku in India, she had translated six books of haiku from English to Hindi.
L1 depicts a seasonal rainy scene, while enhanced by the zoom-in technique, the shift, tonal and emotional , in L3 makes this monsoon haiku fresh and effective.
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