English Original
winter sky
the painter's downstroke
at a snail's pace
Akitsu, Winter, 2020
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
冬天的天空
畫家以蝸牛的速度
的下筆
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
冬天的天空
画家以蜗牛的速度
的下笔
Bio Sketch
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi, a Master Black Belt in Six Sigma, is currently working in a pharma company in Hyderabad, India. His haiku are regularly published in all the leading haiku journals
Why at a snail's pace in L3? We have no clue, but can detect a hint of the emotional implication of L1, "winter" [mostly gray] "sky."
ReplyDeleteThis is a fine middle-of-the-story mood haiku.