English Original
frosted grass ...
the weight of secrets
unrevealed
MahMight Haiku, June 6 2021
Daniela Misso
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
結霜的草叢 ...
未透露秘密
之重
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
结霜的草丛 ...
未透露秘密
之重
Bio Sketch
Daniela Misso is a haiku poet from Italy who has some haiku published in Italian anthologies, journals, blogs and e-zines. She resides in a medieval village where she enjoys observing and immersing herself in nature. In 2021, she was awarded first place in the AHA Haiku/Senryu Contest, first place in the Annual Hortensia Anderson Memorial Award, and second place in the Fleeting Words Tanka Contest.
L1 sets the scene and mood while Ls 2&3 add emotional weight and psychological depth to the haiku.
ReplyDeleteAnd it might be interesting to do a thematic comparison reading of my haiku below:
the weight of her name ...
on a blade of plum grass
morning frost
VerseWrights, December 11. 2013