Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Butterfly Dream: Smell of Rain Haiku by Asni Amin

English Original

smell of rain ...
a dream unfolds in the chatter
of sparrows

Simply Haiku, 10:3, Summer 2013

Asni Amin


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

雨的味道 ...
夢在麻雀喋喋不休中
逐漸開展

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

雨的味道 ...
梦在麻雀喋喋不休中
逐渐开展


Bio Sketch

Asni Amin lives in Singapore and works as a librarian in a school.  She started writing haiku in 2012 and has her works published in Simply Haiku and various other ebooks online. 

1 comment:

  1. In L1 Asni skillfully sets the emotive context while in Ls 2&3 her effective use of synaesthesia enhances the tone and mood of the poem.

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