Showing posts with label haiku. Show all posts
Showing posts with label haiku. Show all posts

Sunday, September 20, 2026

Poetic Musings: Seashell Haiku by Chen-ou Liu



Commentary by The Solitary Daisy Columnist, Sean B. Wright.

This is a resonant, memory-laden haiku that uses a familiar sensory gesture to evoke distance, identity, and longing. The opening line, “years in exile,” establishes a wide temporal and emotional horizon, suggesting separation from homeland, endurance over time, and a life shaped by displacement. It is a heavy and somewhat abstract beginning, but it clearly sets the stakes and frames how the reader approaches the image that follows.

The phrase “a Pacific seashell” grounds the poem in something tangible while also expanding its scope. The specificity of “Pacific” is important—it evokes not just a place, but an entire ocean, compressing vast geography into a small, handheld object. The shell becomes more than an object; it carries with it the weight of memory, origin, and possibly the speaker’s lost or distant home.

The final line, “held to my ear,” completes the image with a simple, familiar gesture. This act of listening to a seashell is almost universal, often associated with childhood curiosity, but here it takes on a more poignant dimension. It becomes an attempt to recover something distant, to hear again what has been left behind. The sensory immediacy of this action contrasts effectively with the abstraction of exile in the opening line.

What gives the haiku its strength is the juxtaposition between the abstract condition of exile and the concrete, intimate act of holding the shell to the ear. The seashell functions as a bridge between past and present, between homeland and current place, and between memory and physical sensation. The implied “sound” of the ocean—whether real or imagined—becomes a stand-in for what has been lost, or at least what cannot be directly accessed.

The tone throughout is reflective and gently elegiac. There is a quiet ache present, but it is restrained; the poem does not state its emotion outright, instead allowing it to resonate through the image. Sonically, the poem is unobtrusive, the sibilant s sounds in Pacific and seashells echo the sea’s quieter movements.

Overall, this is a thoughtful and evocative haiku in which a simple, tactile action carries deep emotional resonance. The seashell becomes a conduit for memory and belonging, compressing vast distance into a quiet, intimate moment. While the opening leans toward abstraction, the image that follows sustains and deepens the poem effectively.


FYI: My haiku below could be read as its prequel and sequel, respectively:

I stare
past the moonlit ocean . . .
tenth year in exile

Second Place, 35th Capstone International Center Sakura Haiku Contest, 2021

And

gray-haired exile
the waves ebb and flow
in a conch shell 

Friday, September 18, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Solitude Haiku by Natalia Kuznetsova

English Original

solitude ...
a nightingale's solo
out of darkness 

Enchanted Garden, 16, 2026

Natalia Kuznetsova


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

獨處 ...
來自黑暗
夜鶯的獨唱

Chinese Translation (Simplified) 

独处 ...
来自黑暗
夜莺的独唱


Bio Sketch

Living in Moscow, Russia, Natalia Kuznetsova is a teacher of English and freelance interpreter. Before discovering the haiku world, she wrote poetry in Russian. She started writing tanka and mostly haiku in English in 2007, and participated in numerous competitions worldwide and won some awards. She contributes regularly to World Haiku ReviewAsahi Haikuist NetworkDaily HaikuPoetry Pea and other traditional and on-line publications. She was included on the list of "European Top 100 Most Creative Haiku Authors" from 2010 to 2023.

Thursday, September 17, 2026

Special Feature: Selected Poems for Reflections on Israeli "Gaza Genocide Documentary, NAZA"

(FYI: Haaretz, September 17, 2026: Netanyahu Vows to Revoke Israeli Citizenship Over Alleged IDF 'Defamation' in Response to 'NAZA' Film

Netanyahu said that he would also work to increase twentyfold the amount of damages people can sue for defamation against IDF soldiers: 'We will hit them both in the pocket and in citizenship, because they have no place among us'

And

Democracy Now, September 16, 2026: “The Elimination Project”: Israel’s Systematic Dismantling of Palestinian Life in West Bank: B’Tselem" (Israeli human rights group)

A major new report by the Israeli human rights group B’Tselem titled “The Elimination Project” accuses Israel of “dramatically intensifying its attacks on every aspect of Palestinian life in the West Bank.”

B’Tselem Executive Director ,Yuli Novak: Israel is dismantling the basic conditions needed for collective Palestinian existence in the West Bank. Our new report “The Elimination Project” shows how this mechanism works and how over the past three years, it has become more lethal, violent and explicit. Come with us to the West Bank to see for yourself. The Elimination Project in the West Bank operates through five domains of action that work together and reinforce each other: killing, violence, intimidation, movement restrictions, economic strangulation, social and political destruction, ethnic cleansing and territorial takeover. These are all parts of a system with one aim: to ensure Jewish supremacy and eliminate the Palestinian collective.
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Last week in Venice, an Israeli documentary titled NAZA—a Hebrew acronym for the military term, "collateral damage"—concluded its premiere to a staggering, record-breaking 25-minute standing ovation, ultimately securing the Special Jury Prize at the 83rd Venice International Film Festival. By weaving together testimonies from anonymous IDF soldiers and intelligence officers, directors Yuval Abraham and Rachel Szor laid bare "the SYSTEMS behind Israel's calculated mass killing of Palestinian civilians in Gaza."

The truth proved dangerous. Within days, Culture Minister Miki Zohar accused the filmmakers of treason and threatened to strip them of their citizenship, while opposition leader Avigdor Lieberman labeled them "enemies of Israel." Yet, even as official threats mount, a fractures of dissent have appeared: fourteen Israeli international law scholars have called for an independent war crimes investigation, and over a thousand local filmmakers have signed a petition warning that the vitriol against Abraham and Szor is fast approaching physical danger.

This collision between state narrative and systemic exposure brings us back to the words of US Senator Hiram Johnson in 1918: “The first casualty, when war comes, is truth.

For too long, these realities have been ignored or enabled by Western powers, particularly the US. As a quiet resistance to that silence, I offer the latest two entries—one haiku and one tanka—from my writing project, Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words.


CCCVIII: "smoky clouds"

where tents were
a tornado-twist
of smoky clouds


And CCCIX: "attack drone"

in smoky twilight
a mule-drawn flatboard wagon 
with wounded Gazans ...
an attack drone flying past
silences everything below


To conclude today's "Special Feature" post, I would like to share with you the following penetrating remarks on "SILENCE"  by Martin Luther King Jr., who noted that "remaining quiet in the face of injustice makes people complicit in the harm."


There comes a time when silence is betrayal.

Our lives begin to end the day we become silent about things that matter.

In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.

And

We will have to repent in this generation, not only for the evil words and deeds of the bad people, but for the appalling silence of the good people.


FYI: +972 Magazine, September 10, 2026: NAZA: Exposing Israel’s killing machine in Gaza written by Directors Yuval Abraham and Rachel Szor

Over the past three years, we conducted night-time interviews on the rooftops of Tel Aviv with 24 Israeli soldiers who played an active role in Israel’s onslaught on Gaza. Most of them were intelligence officers, working behind screens and participating remotely in the mass killing of Palestinians. 

Their testimonies form the basis of “NAZA,” a new documentary we directed ...

This is a film about a system. It focuses on orders, policies, and patterns of operation, not deviations from them. The conclusion that we draw from the testimonies is clear: The mass killing of Palestinian civilians in Gaza was not a “tragic byproduct” of a war against Hamas, as it is commonly portrayed in Israel, but a premeditated, calculated, and intentional act. This is why a UN commission, the world’s leading human rights groups, and Palestinian, Israeli, and international scholars have described it as a genocide.


Added: Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCCX: "Yom Kippur"

after the shofar's long blast
the Ark's curtain pulls closed ...
forty miles away
smoke column after column
climbing without end in Gaza


FYI: The final, absolute closure of Yom Kippur is signaled by a single, long blast of the shofar (the Tekiah Gedolah). This blast formally brings the fast to an end, representing the final "click" of the lock. Only after this blast is the physical curtain of the Ark pulled closed, and the community transitions into the evening service and Havdalah.

Wednesday, September 16, 2026

A Room of My Own: Crimson Sunset Glow Haiku

hospice garden
crimson sunset glow
across her face


FYI: This could be read as a prequel to my haiku below:

hospice garden
the wishing fountain fills
with fallen leaves



Added:

echo of footsteps
in the psych ward hallway
EXIT blinking


Added:

hushed silence
before and after
a midnight scream


Added:

war cemetery
in slanted moonlight
new row of graves


FYI: This could be read as a prequel to my haiku below:

war cemetery 
birthday on this tombstone
uncarved

Tuesday, September 15, 2026

To the Lighthouse: Haiku and the Void (Śūnyatā)

In Zen-inspired haiku, the Void (Śūnyatā) can be approached not as emptiness in the sense of nothingness, but as the absence of fixed boundaries between things. The moment is allowed to appear without being possessed or explained. There is no need for a separate observer standing outside the experience; the poet, the perception, and what is perceived can become one.

This is one reason haiku can be so well suited to exploring Śūnyatā. By saying less, the poem creates an open space in which the reader can enter the moment directly. What is left unsaid becomes as important as what is spoken.


Consider this haiku:

sunset, moonrise—
held
in a heartbeat

Here, the who or what doing the holding is intentionally left open. There is no “I” watching the sky, and therefore no explicit separation between observer and observed. Rather than telling a story about someone witnessing sunset and moonrise, the haiku simply presents the moment.

At first, sunset and moonrise appear to be separate events unfolding along a timeline. Yet the phrase in a heartbeat collapses that distance. Within a single pulse of awareness, the transition from one to the other can be experienced not as two events but as one unified "moment of suchness"—things appearing exactly as they are, before the mind divides and labels them.

The missing “I” is significant, but the haiku is not without a living presence. The "heartbeat" suggests one. Yet it need not belong exclusively to the narrator. It can be "felt as a meeting point between the intimate and the immense': the small rhythm of a human life mirroring the vast rhythms of the cosmos.

The celestial and the bodily become reflections of one another. Sunset, moonrise, and heartbeat are no longer entirely separate things. Each participates in the same unfolding reality.

And because there is no “I” to own the experience, the reader is free to enter it. The poem does not tell us what someone saw; it provides the empty space in which we can see for ourselves. We bring our own awareness to the moment and, perhaps, feel the pulse within it.

In this sense, what is “held” is the Void—not an empty nothingness, but an open, pregnant silence in which distinctions temporarily fall away and everything is allowed to arise.

The haiku does not describe Śūnyatā. It leaves room for us to experience it.


Another example,

moon in water—
the ripples
where it was

L1 presents an apparently simple image: moon in water. Yet what is actually present is not the moon itself, but its reflection—a phenomenon dependent upon the moon, the water, the light, the distance between them, and the conditions of perception.

When the ripples appear in L2, the reflection disappears in L3:

the ripples
where it was

Yet nothing substantial has been destroyed. The moon remains in the sky; the water remains; the ripples arise and pass. What disappears is an appearance that never possessed an independent existence of its own. Its presence was always contingent upon particular conditions.

In this sense, the haiku evokes the paradox expressed in the Heart Sutra: “Form is emptiness; emptiness is form.” The moon's reflection has form—it can be seen, recognized, and momentarily experienced—yet it is empty of svabhāva, or inherent self-nature. It exists only through a temporary convergence of conditions.

The reflection therefore is not simply an illusion to be dismissed as unreal. It is real as an experience, but empty as an independent entity. When one of its conditions changes—the still surface of the water is disturbed—the reflection ceases to appear. Nothing has returned to some underlying metaphysical Void. Rather, the conditions that sustained that particular form have changed.

This is where the final phrase, “where it was,” becomes especially significant. The poem does not say “where the moon was” or even “where its reflection was.” The pronoun it remains deliberately unresolved. What exactly has disappeared? The moon? Its reflection? The image perceived by the observer? The poem refuses to settle the question.

That ambiguity opens a space for contemplating non-duality. Moon, reflection, water, ripples, and observer are not presented as wholly separate entities. Each exists in relation to the others. The “moon in the water” has no existence apart from those relationships; its apparent identity arises from them.

The image of water also invites a familiar Zen association with the mind. A still surface reflects clearly; when disturbed, the reflection breaks apart. Yet the haiku subtly moves beyond the idea that there is a perfectly still mind capable of reflecting some independently existing “truth.” Even the clear reflection is empty. Stillness does not give the moon a self-nature; it merely provides the conditions under which the reflection appears.

The ripples therefore do not simply destroy an illusion. They reveal its contingency.

And this is where the poem's formal economy becomes important. The final phrase, “where it was,” points toward an absence without filling that absence with an explanation. There is a cognitive gap between the vanished reflection and the place it occupied. The reader instinctively searches for the missing object, but the poem provides only water and ripples.

That gap can be understood as a poetic enactment of Śūnyatā. The reader reaches for something solid to grasp—the moon, the reflection, the identity of it—but finds nothing fixed. What remains is not nothingness, but the continually changing field of phenomena: water, ripples, light, perception.

The haiku therefore does not merely describe emptiness; its structure invites the reader to experience the letting-go of conceptual grasping. An image appears. It changes. The mind looks for what has disappeared. The poem offers no fixed answer.

What remains is not the Void as a blank nothingness, but an openness in which things arise, change, and pass away without possessing an independent self.

The moon was never truly in the water. And yet, for a moment, it was there.

Monday, September 14, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Obituary Column Haiku by Pravat Kumar Padhy

English Original

obituary column messaging silence into the sky

Under the Basho, August 28 2017

Pravat Kumar Padhy 


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

訃聞專欄向天空傳達沉默的訊息

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

讣闻专栏向天空传达沉默的讯息


Bio Sketch

Pravat Kumar Padhy, a poet-scientist, did his Masters and Ph.D from IIT-Dhanbad, India. Work referred in Spectrum History of Indian Literature in EnglishAlienation in Contemporary Indian English Poetry etc. His Japanese short form of poetry appeared in many international journals. He is a recipient of Editor’s Choice Awards, Special and Honourable Mentions. His fourth collection of verses, Ripple of Resonance, is in press.

Saturday, September 12, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Cliff Edge Haiku by Marion Clarke

English Original

cliff edge —
a burning sky
behind us

Honourable Mention, IHS International Haiku Competition 2022

Marion Clarke 


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

懸崖邊緣—
在我們的身後
火燒的天空

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

悬崖边缘—
在我们的身后
火烧的天空


Bio Sketch

Marion Clarke is from the east coast of Northern Ireland. Growing up surrounded by the scenic shores of Carlingford Lough, the Mourne Mountains and Kilbroney Forest Park,  she was destined to write haiku.

Friday, September 11, 2026

Special Feature: Selected Poems for Reflections on Remembrance of 9/11

My Dear Friends:

On this 25th anniversary of 9/11, I would like to share a few poems reflecting on how we—Americans and non-Americans alike—remember this tragedy: not only through the lens of individual grief, but also against the heavy sociopolitical and geopolitical landscape shaped by the “War on Terror.”


false dawn
in a bead of grass dew —
September 11

another year
another “thoughts and prayers” —
9/11, grayer


And after ...

Facing south, a sea of white empty chairs, 2,753 in all, flooded the lawn of Bryant Park, Midtown Manhattan. One for each person. Not a breath of air. This burden of hushed silence...

blinds drawn
against the light of dawn
9/11, yet not


FYI: This is a sequel to my haibun below:

An Unofficial Story, A Haibun
for Oskar

ink-black:
smoke trails a life
from the north tower

Another sleepless night. Winter moonlight on the empty side of her bed. From the bedside table, she picks up A Place of Remembrance: The Official Photo Book of 9/11. She stares at the book for a moment. The tears roll down her face as she rips out some of the pages. With a sigh, she puts the torn-out pages in reverse order. When she flips through them, dozens of people are flying through the windows back into the building.


Comment by cattails Haibun Editor Sonam Chhoki: The power of Chen-ou Liu’s haibun, "An Unofficial Story for Oskar" lies in its closing sentence: “When she flips through them, dozens of people are flying through the windows back into the building.” It is amazingly evocative image that has echoes of redemption and freedom from the tyranny of time.


Retracing and Reflecting
for those who have journeyed heavily across the landscape of the heart

the light of dawn
on September Twelfth
the time it takes 
for leaves zigzagging 
to the dust-choked ground

off the tower
one after many sped downward —
Muslim lives
and our world ripped by the day
before and forever

the footprint
of each tower that once stood
now surrounded
by four walls of water and grief
an Afghan woman's look


FYI: The dedication alludes to Melvina Young's remark:

Sadness takes its own time. It can't be hurried along. It can't be rushed. It "moves heavily across the landscape of the heart" until time and love can carry it further into the distance. 


Added:

Ground Zero silence --
yet this golfball-brained man
closes his eyes, snoring


FYI: The New Republic, September 11, 2026: Trump Falls Asleep Onstage at September 11 Ceremony

Thursday, September 10, 2026

A Room of My Own: Moonlit Kiss Haiku

our moonlit kiss ...
that first time years ago
and the last


Added:

sultry night
a couple knee-deep
in stars


Added:

jasmine breeze
tonight smells of her
gone for years


Added:

moving day
the backyard swing 
slows to a stop


Added:

summer's end
the blue morpho
under a pin


Added:

sky tinged smoky gray
alone, I drive slowly past
what's left


FYI: This could be read as a sequel to the following:

cliff edge —
a burning sky
behind us

Honourable Mention, IHS International Haiku Competition 2022

Marion Clarke 

Wednesday, September 9, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Blue Bones Haiku by Susan Constable

English Original

knife cold swimming into blue bones

Modern Haiku, 44:1, 2013

Susan Constable


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

刀刃冰冷般地游入藍骨

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

刀刃冰冷般地游入蓝骨


Bio Sketch

Susan Constable (1943–2026) was an award-winning Canadian poet whose haiku and tanka appeared widely in global journals. She authored the acclaimed collection The Eternity of Waves and served as tanka editor for A Hundred Gourds (2012–2016). Constable also co-edited multiple anthologies and judged numerous international short-form poetry contests. 

Sunday, September 6, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Snowplow's Light Haiku by Jacek Margolak

English Original

night deepens
the snowplow's light
fading in the drift

Jacek Margolak 

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

夜色漸深
鏟雪車的燈光漸漸
消失在雪堆中

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

夜色渐深
铲雪车的灯光渐渐
消失在雪堆中


Bio Sketch

Born in Rzeszów, Jacek Margolak now lives in Kielce, Poland. A printing technologist by profession, he has spent nearly twenty years writing Japanese short-form poetry, sometimes blending haiku with prose. His work appears in leading international journals and has received awards in Polish and Japanese competitions. 

Saturday, September 5, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Grandfather's Vine Haiku by Denis M. Garrison

English Original

bits of trellis
deep within its coils —
grandfather's vine

Eight Shades of Blue, 2007

Denis M. Garrison


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

棚架的碎片
深深嵌入藤蔓的蜷曲之中 —
祖父的藤蔓

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

棚架的碎片
深深嵌入藤蔓的蜷曲之中 —
祖父的藤蔓


Bio Sketch

Denis M. Garrison was born in Iowa, USA, and his childhood was spent in Japan, youth in Europe, Africa and western Pacific. His poetry’s widely published. Garrison’s print collections include First Winter Rain,Eight Shades of BlueHidden RiverSailor in the Rain and Other Poems, and Fire Blossoms.

Thursday, September 3, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Held Breath Haiku by Sonam Chhoki

English Original

first rain releasing held breath of summer

tinywords, 13:3, 2013

Sonam Chhoki 


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

第一場雨釋放夏日屏息的呼吸

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

第一场雨释放夏日屏息的呼吸


Bio Sketch

Sonam Chhoki finds the Japanese short form poetry resonates with her Tibetan Buddhist upbringing.  She is inspired by her father, Sonam Gyamtsho, the architect of Bhutan's non-monastic modern education and by her mother, Chhoden Jangmu, who taught her: “Being a girl doesn’t mean you can’t do anything.” She is the principal editor, and co-editor of haibun for the United Haiku and Tanka Society journal, cattails.

Wednesday, September 2, 2026

Poetic Musings: Prayer Plant Haiku by Barbara Sabol

another shooting
leaves of my prayer plant
unfurl

Modern Haiku, 53:1, Winter/Spring  2022

Barbara Sabol


Commentary: By juxtaposing human tragedy with the silent, automatic rhythms of nature, this sociopolitically conscious haiku creates a powerful tension.

The plant’s name in L2 evokes the phrase “thoughts and prayers,” often criticized as an empty, passive response to gun violence. The irony of the plant’s “unfurling” in L3 is deepened through its biological blindness.

At night, the prayer plant folds its leaves upward like hands in prayer; during the day, it unfurls them. By showing the plant unfurling after a shooting in L1, the haiku suggests several possibilities: the absence of genuine, action-oriented prayer; the reopening of a wound; or nature simply moving on, indifferent to human trauma.

The plant acts out of pure instinct — nyctinasty — highlighting the cold contrast between a predictable natural world and a chaotic human one. This irony resonates especially in the United States, a country with more guns than people, where mass shootings have become part of the daily landscape.

Sunday, August 30, 2026

To the Lighthouse: The Art of the One-Liner, Mastering the "Enjambed Double-Take"

In traditional multi-line poetry, enjambment occurs when a phrase runs over a line break without punctuation, pulling the reader forward before the thought is complete. But how does this work in a single-line haiku, where there is no physical line break?

Instead of relying on layout, poets can create enjambment through grammar and semantics.

A double-take occurs when a reader initially parses a word or phrase one way, only to discover a moment later that it belongs to—and transforms—the next part of the image. The mind is forced to step back, take a second look, and reread the line with a newly configured understanding.

Here are two examples of how haiku poets can use this sophisticated technique.


Example 1: The Seamless Pivot

an ocean wave the wind through the grain

Stepping Stones: Haiku & Tanka Selected and New, 2007

Martin Lucas


The First Take

Reading from left to right, the mind naturally groups the opening words as “an ocean wave.” An immediate image appears: water breaking on a shore.

The Enjambment

The poem then moves seamlessly into “wave the wind.” For an instant, the mind may try to interpret wave as a verb—as though the ocean itself were waving toward the wind.

The Double-Take

Then comes the final word: “grain.”

An ocean does not have grain.

At that moment, the syntax and imagery reorganize themselves. The reader realizes that “the wind through the grain” forms a separate visual field: a field of wheat or grass moving in the wind.

Because there is no punctuation to serve as a stop sign, the space between wave and the wind becomes a pivot point. The mind must unconsciously remap the grammatical structure, shifting almost instantaneously from a seascape to a field: 

an ocean wave the wind [cut] through the grain

The effect is subtle but powerful: the poem does not tell us to change our interpretation. It makes us discover that we have been reading it incorrectly.


Example 2: The Political and Emotional Snap

Against the Drowning Noise of Other Words, CCCVII: "Gazan girl's red balloon"

to Banksy

fireballs bursting into the dark a Gazan girl's red balloon

Chen-ou Liu


The Setup

The dedication “to Banksy” acts as a joshi (prefatory note). It immediately activates the reader's memory of Banksy's iconic Girl with Balloon, an image associated with childhood, innocence, hope, and loss.

By invoking and subverting that familiar symbol, the haiku connects a distant geopolitical tragedy to an image the reader may already carry emotionally.

The First Pass

As the eye moves across the line, it encounters:

“fireballs bursting into the dark…”

The words naturally form a coherent image. The mind assumes that the fireballs are what is moving or exploding into the darkness.

Then the line continues.

The Snap-Back

“…a Gazan girl's red balloon.”

The reader suddenly has to reconsider the grammar.

The phrase “into the dark” can also attach to the balloon.

The mind performs its double-take: the darkness is no longer merely the backdrop against which fireballs explode. It becomes the destination of the girl's red balloon:

fireballs bursting [cut] into the dark a Gazan girl's red balloon

The Dual Meaning

This grammatical ambiguity forces the reader to hold two images simultaneously:

The violence: Fireballs burst across a dark sky.
The loss: Amid the chaos, a child's red balloon slips away and drifts upward into the darkness.

The phrase “into the dark” therefore acquires a haunting, elegiac resonance. The balloon is no longer simply a toy. It can suggest a life, a soul, childhood innocence, or the last fragile remnant of hope ascending into an unknowable void.

The poem's meaning changes during the act of reading.

That is the crucial feature of the enjambed double-take: the reader does not merely encounter two interpretations. The first interpretation actively creates the conditions for the second.


Why It Works

The enjambed double-take, closely related to what literary theory might describe as a syntactic pivot or, in some contexts, an apokoinu, is a powerful way of making the reader participate in the construction of meaning.

Punctuation normally tells us where one grammatical unit ends and another begins. Remove that punctuation, and the reader has to supply the boundaries.

The poet can exploit that uncertainty.

A word initially appears to belong to one phrase, only to reveal itself as belonging to another. The reader experiences a tiny moment of disorientation, followed by recognition. The poem seems to change shape—not on the page, but inside the reader's mind.

That moment of correction can produce the sensation of a sudden realization, a sharp intake of breath, or an abrupt emotional shift.

In the best examples, the double-take is not merely a clever grammatical trick. The moment of rereading becomes part of the poem's meaning.

The reader is made to experience the poem's uncertainty, reversal, or shock rather than simply being told about it.

Friday, August 28, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Blackbird's Song Haiku by Fatma Zohra Habis

English Original 

spring drizzle
my friend returns 
in blackbird’s song 

EJCA Spring Haiku Anthology, 2026

Fatma Zohra Habis
 

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

春雨綿綿
在黑鳥的歌聲中
我的朋友歸來

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

春雨绵绵
在黑鸟的歌声中
我的朋友归来

 
Bio Sketch

Fatma Zohra Habis lives in Algeria. She loves poetry and Japanese culture. Her specialty is physics. Her haiku and tanka have been published in journals around the world, such as Enchanted Garden, The Sacred Dragonfly, The Leaf Journal, and haikuKatha.

Wednesday, August 26, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Sipping Sherry Haiku by Marion Alice Poirier

English Original

sipping sherry ...
through the humid dusk
cricket song

Marion Alice Poirier


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

啜飲雪莉酒 ...
蟋蟀的鳴叫滲透
潮濕悶熱的黃昏

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

啜饮雪莉酒 ...
蟋蟀的鸣叫渗透
潮湿闷热的黄昏


Bio Sketch

Marion Alice Poirier is a lifetime resident of Boston, MA. She began writing haiku in 2001 and eventually began to teach haiku in workshops on Poetry Circle and Emerging Poets. She also write short poetry and have been published in on-line haiku and short poetry journals like Tinywords, Hedgerow and The Heron's Nest.

Tuesday, August 25, 2026

Biting NOT Barking: Identity Haiku by Fay Aoyagi

English Original

I
dent
it(ch)y

Modern Haiku, 52:3, Autumn 2021

Fay Aoyagi


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

受傷彎身
開始(發癢)了

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

受伤弯身
开始(发痒)了

 
Bio Sketch

Fay Aoyagi (青柳飛)was born in Tokyo and immigrated to the U.S. in 1982. She is currently a member of Haiku Society of America and Haiku Poets of Northern California. She serves as an associate editor of The Heron's Nest.  She also writes in Japanese and belongs to two Japanese haiku groups; Ten'I (天為) and "Aki"(秋), and  she is a member of Haijin Kyokai (俳人協会).

Monday, August 24, 2026

Poetic Musings: Pink Clouds Haiku by Lorraine Pester

a tornado-twist
of pink clouds ...
this time of life

NeverEnding Story, February 17, 2025

Lorraine Pester

Commentary: This is a highly effective haiku. It captures a vivid sensory moment while pairing it with an open-ended, deeply personal reflection.

The striking contrast between the violent movement suggested by “tornado-twist” in L1 and the soft, delicate image of “pink clouds” in L2 creates an immediate poetic tension. The image is simultaneously beautiful and unsettling, suggesting both wonder and turbulence.

The ellipsis at the end of L2 functions effectively as a kireji-like pause, creating a moment of suspension between the external landscape of Ls 1-2 and the inward reflection of L3. The reader is invited to linger over the image before making the conceptual leap to “this time of life.”

L3 then transforms the preceding image into a metaphor. “This time of life” can evoke aging, a particular stage of existence, a chaotic period of change, or a beautiful yet turbulent transition. Because the poem does not specify which, the final line remains open and allows the reader to bring their own experience to it.

Ultimately, the haiku suggests the experience of being swept through a beautiful but turbulent stage of life. Its ambiguity is one of its greatest strengths: the tornado, the clouds, and the “time of life” remain suggestively interconnected without the poem explaining exactly how.

Friday, August 21, 2026

Butterfly Dream: Lightning Flash Haiku by David Watts

English Original

lightning flash
my whiskey
rippling

David Watts

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

閃電
我的威士忌酒杯
泛起漣漪

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

闪电
我的威士忌酒杯
泛起涟漪


Bio Sketch

David Watts' most recent haiku collection is Breath (Red Moon Press, 2026). He has published poetry, short stories, mysteries, memoir and westerns and is professor of English and Poetry Writing at the Fromm Institute of San Francisco. He is a scientist, a classically trained musician and creator of poetry workshops.