first snowflakes
on the wreckage
of a boat...
the same dog from yesterday
waiting on the shore
Eucalypt, 17, 2014
Lavana Kray
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
初雪
覆蓋一條船
的殘骸 ...
昨天來的那隻狗
仍在岸邊等候
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
初雪
覆盖一条船
的残骸 ...
昨天来的那只狗
仍在岸边等候
Bio Sketch
Lavana
Kray is from Iasi – Romania. She is passionate about writing and
photography. Nature and the events of her life provide ideas and
inspiration for writing. She has won several awards, including WHA
Master Haiga Artist 2015. Her work has been published in many print and online journals, including Haiku Canada Review, The Mainichi, Ginyu, Daily Haiga, Frogpond, Haiga Online, Ribbons, Eucalypt, Acorn, and Ardea. She was chosen for Haiku Euro Top 100, 2015. This is her blog: http://photohaikuforyou.blogspot.ro
Lavana's tanka is concise with vivid imagery and tightly structured with a strong emotional undercurrent. Each line adds something significant to the poem, culminating in the final line, which strongly underlies the dog's unwavering loyalty to its master. And we all know that even in cold weather (as indicated in L1), the dog will come to the shore and wait for its master's return tomorrow, the day after tomorrow,...
ReplyDeleteThis heartfelt tanka reminds me one of my haiku, which was inspired by a real-life event:
ghost bike
locked to the lamppost...
a beagle at dusk
Croatian Translation
bicikl kraj puta
lzakljucan za stup lampe...
bigl u sumrak
Iris, 1, 2015
Note: A ghost bike is a bicycle set up as a roadside memorial in a place where a cyclist was killed