spring thaw
my wife undresses
with the lights on
Asahi Haikuist Network, 6 March 2015
Bob Lucky
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
春天融雪
我太太脫衣服時
開著燈
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
春天融雪
我太太脱衣服时
开著灯
Bio Sketch
Bob Lucky is the author of the chapbook Ethiopian Time and the content editor at Contemporary Haibun Online. He lives in Saudi Arabia.
The visually and emotionally resonant juxtaposition makes this sensual haiku effective and affecting, and on a second reading, the opening image, "spring thaw," successfully carries symbolic significance.
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