Thursday, May 18, 2017

A Room of My Own: War Tanka

a murder of crows
darkens
the morning sky ...
not a word
about the war
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2 comments:

  1. Laurence55June 19, 2017 at 2:39 AM

    This is a beautiful tanka. The pivot is excellent and expands the reading nicely.

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