Wednesday, November 29, 2017

Butterfly Dream: Breaking Waves Haiku by Robert Epstein

English Original

the answer is yes no yes breaking waves

Touchstone Individual Poem Award, 2015

Robert Epstein


Chinese Translation (Traditional)

答案是不是是破浪而出

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

答案是不是是破浪而出


Bio Sketch

Robert Epstein, a psychologist and haiku poet/anthologist, lives and works in the San Francisco Bay Area. He has edited four anthologies:  The Breath of Surrender; Dreams Wander On; The Temple Bell Stops; and Now This.  He has written two books of haiku:  A Walk Around Spring Lake; and Checkout Time is Noon, as well as a chapbook titled, What My Niece Said in His Head:  Haiku and Senryu

1 comment:

  1. “This poem shows how we can be indecisive and still find solace in the natural world and its rhythm. Perhaps, this poem also highlights uncertainty in a relationship.”

    “This poem embodies the shift in and out of decisiveness through the poem's rhythm, echoing the swell and crash of waves. A reminder that change is the nature of life itself.”

    “Faced with a perplexing problem/decision, it is easy to imagine seeking solitude at the beach. But the repetitive breaking waves bring no answers — just options. Yes. No. Yes. No. Unlike plucking daisy petals (“he loves me; he loves me not”), there is no finite answer. The waves come on without letup (back and forth: the one-line format illustrates that perfectly) — and without definitive resolution.”

    -- Comments from the Panel, which can be accessed at https://www.thehaikufoundation.org/touchstone-awards-for-2015/

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