Friday, June 22, 2018

Butterfly Dream: Milking Time Haiku by Keitha Keyes

English Original

milking time ...
a tide of cows
flows into dawn

Windfall, 6, 2018

Keitha Keyes

Chinese Translation (Traditional)

擠奶時間 ...

Chinese Translation (Simplified)

挤奶时间 ...

Bio Sketch

Keitha Keyes lives in Sydney, Australia in a small house decorated with ship models, antique irons and trivets. And a cocker spaniel. Her retirement would be very empty without the lure of writing tanka, haiku, senryu, cherita and other poetry.

1 comment:

  1. L1 sets the theme while the grand and powerful image of cows like tidal waves flowing into the dairy barn in the early morning in Ls 2&3 makes this haiku visually and emotionally effective.