thawing stream
the forgotten words
of a song ...
brass bell, January, 2017
Caroline Skanne
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
解凍的溪流
一首歌
被遺忘的歌詞
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
解冻的溪流
一首歌
被遗忘的歌词
Bio Sketch
Caroline Skanne, Rochester, UK is obsessed with anything wild and free. She is the founder of hedgerow: a journal of small poems. Her book a hundred poems by caroline skanne is available from amazon.
Combined with the effective use of "...", the emotional contrast between the two parts of the haiku is poignant.
ReplyDeleteA fine mood haiku where what's left unsaid is as potent as what's said!