family dispute
foxtail outgrows
the farmhouse
Failed Haiku, 2:33, 2018
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
家庭糾紛
狐尾草長到超出
農舍以外
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
家庭纠纷
狐尾草长到超出
农舍以外
Bio Sketch
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi, a Master Black Belt in Six Sigma, is currently working in a pharma company as Head of Operational Excellence. He lives in Hyderabad, India. His haiku are regularly published in all leading haiku journals. He won a honorable mention in Irish Haiku Society Haiku Contest 2017 and a honorable mention in Betty Drevniok Haiku awards 2018.
L1 sets the theme and mood while the troublesome image of Ls 2&3 implies the state of family feud.
ReplyDeleteWhat's left unsaid is at least as potent as what's written.
So much is left unsaid in moments like these. I like how much you stepped away from the argument and then maybe the argument was about the overgrown foxtails and they need thinning out; painting a different picture.
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