English Original
snow on snow
all the things
we keep hidden
tinywords, 17:1, 14 June, 2017
Rachel Sutcliffe
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
雪上加雪
所有我們隱藏
的事情
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
雪上加雪
所有我们隐藏
的事情
Bio Sketch
Rachel Sutcliffe had suffered from a serious immune disorder for over 16 years; throughout this time writing had been her therapy, and it kept her from going insane! She was an active member of the British Haiku Society and has been published in various journals including Prune Juice, Failed Haiku and Hedgerow.
L1 sets the scene and mood while Ls 2&3 add emotional weight and psychological depth to the haiku where the things are buried deep beneath the surface/piles of snow.
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