English Original
writer's block
crisscrossing my keyboard
the same ant?
echoes of flight, 2018
Jane Williams
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
寫作時大腦閉塞
在我的鍵盤上縱橫交錯地爬行
是同一隻螞蟻？
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
写作时大脑闭塞
在我的键盘上纵横交错地爬行
是同一只蚂蚁？
Bio Sketch
Jane Williams is an Australian poet based in Tasmania. To read more of her poetry, please visit her website
L1 sets the theme and mood while the the observation about ants /distraction on writing in Ls 2&3 effectively enhances the "hai" (comic) aspect of the haiku.
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