English Original
winter morning
the shape of words
I speak to her
Autumn Moon Journal, 3:1, 2019
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi
Chinese Translation (Traditional)
冬天的早晨
我對她所說的話
的狀態
Chinese Translation (Simplified)
冬天的早晨
我对她所说的话
的状态
Bio Sketch
Srinivasa Rao Sambangi, a Master Black Belt in Six Sigma, is currently working in a pharma company in Hyderabad, India. His haiku are regularly published in all the leading haiku journals
Enhanced by the tone and mood of L1, middle-of-the-story Ls 2&3 reveal something significant about the state of the speaker's relationship with his loved one.
ReplyDeleteAnd my haiku below could be read as a sequel to Srinivasa's:
the cold moon...
I want to touch her
into words
Selected Haiku, 2013 International Matsuo Basho Award Contest